New Workshop! Lighting 3 | Advanced Off Camera Flash

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Using the Kodak Portra 800 + Rich Colors. I made a few adjustments to exposure and temp. What else could I improve in order to achieve... (show more)
Exif Data
  • NIKON D3400
  • 50.0 MM F/1.8
  • f/3.2
  • 50mm
  • 1/160
  • 100

Q&A Discussions

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  1. Matthew Saville

    I love this filmic edit! I think the overall WB could have been a touch warmer, though. the magenta is getting a bit strong compared to what film might have actually looked like in this scene.

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    Matthew Saville

    The only other critique I can offer is that I think his gaze is a little bit too “off into the sun”; I would have preferred to see his head turned just a little bit to his right, so that it seems like he is more interested in resting against her, and not staring into the sun. Hope this makes sense!

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  3. Ryan Longnecker

    I’d warm it up by about 25% and give it a 2×3 crop wide with the bottom of the crop just being below their hands

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