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Exif Data
  • CANON EOS 40D
  • EF85MM F/1.2L II USM
  • f/1.2
  • 85mm
  • 1/1000
  • 400

Q&A Discussions

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  1. Matthew Saville

    Very cleanly done, Timothy, I like the image overall! My main critique is simply that the crop and simple backdrop leave something to be desired. Chopping the bottom of the cake board, and getting close to the top of the cake as well, is a bit too much cropping for me.

    If the glass table was scratched up and not very pretty, as it appears to be, I would try to do the thing I frequently do in this situation: find a foreground element that can frame the subject, and block any unwanted in-focus elements.

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  2. Matthew Saville

    Also, I think the tones overall could be just a bit warmer; the icing looks a bit cold to me.

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  3. Timothy Bennett

    Thanks for your critique.

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