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Exif Data
  • CANON EOS 70D
  • EF28-135mm f/3.5-5.6 IS USM
  • f/5.6
  • 112mm
  • 1/500
  • 250

3 Comments

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  1. Matthew Saville

    Solid shot Timothy, well done overall. Did you have multiple lights illuminating her face? I’m having a hard time determining which exact position the key light was at, but I think I would have liked to see the key light be a bit higher up, and also with the fill light a bit less bright.

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    David Hill

    Nice us of a gap here Tony between arm and body to help show off her curves! Watch out for your cropping at the edge of frame….you have cut off just a little of her elbow. Dave

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    David Hill

    I love the curve that you have created in her figure above this mark. However (something that I have learnt from Pye) try to avoid a crop at the bottom of the frame that is making her body get wider as it exits the frame……try to get her posed or frame in such a way that her body is ‘thinning’ as it exits the frame. To explain: Think of a shot with her straight onto us. Cross one leg infront of the other and then crop/frame just above the knee……the body is then ‘thinning’ as it exits the image. If you cropped the same shot straight across the hips, it wouldn’t be. Does that make sense? Enjoyed the shot! Dave

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