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Exif Data
  • CANON EOS 70D
  • 70-200MM
  • f/2.8
  • 200mm
  • 1/320
  • 100

6 Comments

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  1. Matthew Saville

    Love the overall vibe here! Smooth colors and tones on the skin, love the flare in the corner, love the expression.

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    Matthew Saville

    The one thing I notice is that her arm and hand are “missing” in this pose, and her fingers are just barely appearing “out of nowhere” so to speak. I would have rather seen her hand a bit more, maybe lower as well.

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    Matthew Saville

    I don’t see any spectral catchlights in her eyes, so is the light on her face natural? I’m just wondering where the flash was placed; it looks like the sun is the source of illumination on the left, but maybe that’s the flash itself… If so, well done! 

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  4. Adrian Van Leeuwen

    The lighting, hair highlights is very interesting and faded background. Perhaps talk more with the subject to get better expression (light smile), unless this expression was your intent or you took a spontaneous photo of the moment with girl contemplating. I might have deepened the dark dress a touch at bottom in post, instead of it reacting to flare. However, I know different photographers have different styles.

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