New Workshop! Lighting 3 | Advanced Off Camera Flash

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Composition? Any other topics that can be improved. Thanks a lot.
Exif Data
  • NIKON D850
  • 14.0-24.0 mm f/2.8
  • f/5.6
  • 22mm
  • 1/400
  • 64

Q&A Discussions

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  1. Matthew Saville

    Hi Sportydad, thanks for submitting this image to SLR Lounge Premium Critiques! I’m really digging the overall tonal range here. Nicely done with the processing of near-white and near-black tones, and the range in between.

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    Matthew Saville

    I am, however, not sure that I like the intentional blur that has been added on this edge, I think it distracts from the overall left-to-right compositional possibilities, and the symmetry of the reflection. I would have just kept the processing simple, instead of trying to emphasize the rock formation on the right.

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    Matthew Saville

    I know that sometimes there’s not much you can do about these things, but the stick in the water is also a bit of a distraction. 

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