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Exif Data
  • CANON EOS 7D MARK II
  • 17-50mm
  • f/4.5
  • 21mm
  • 1/50
  • 1000

3 Comments

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  1. A
    Shivani Reddy

    I think her eye direction is what could use some improvement here, Right now we see alot of the whites of her eyes and are left wondering what exactly she is looking at that is out of frame. I would have had her look either towards her left knee or her folded hands and had him staying looking at the camera, or have her look at him.  

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  2. B
    Shivani Reddy

    The light fall off is off here since everything else is lit evenly. You can control the light with a grid or a snoot, which would have prevented the spill on the couch as well. 

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  3. Scott Pfau

    Thank you for the comments. I agree on the direction she is looking. Wish I had her looking a little more to her left but not a lot. Also agree on the lighting. I did not have a grid for the fill camera right.

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