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Trying something a little more conceptual and would love general CC on it. What could I improve?
Exif Data
  • CANON EOS 5D MARK IV
  • TAMRON SP 24-70mm F/2.8 Di VC USD G2 A032
  • f/2.8
  • 1/40 seconds
  • 3200

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  1. Pye Jirsa

    I like the conceptual nature of this. The compositing of the moon and clouds into the image, the color tones. It all works pretty well to set up this nighttime scene. I do think the overall refinement of the composite could be improved (light rays from the moon, color toning, etc), but that comes with time and practice. I think overall, the image and the toning is a little too blue and lacks warmth, so it can feel almost like a “scary movie” type situation versus maybe the warmth and comfort a baby might experience in a nursery. One way to give this sense is to include an element of warmth, like a baby toy or the overhanging mobile that might be shining warm light into the crib. As is, it feels like something bad might happen. 

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  2. A
    Pye Jirsa

    Blacks are crushed, we need some tone and definition here. 

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  3. B
    Pye Jirsa

    Light rays don’t quite match the source or the way it’s coming through the window. 

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  4. C
    Pye Jirsa

    I want to see more detail throughout the room, leaving the room in shadow, but at least visible shadow. 

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