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Exif Data
  • CANON EOS 5D MARK IV
  • 50mm
  • f/2.8
  • 50mm
  • 1/400
  • 250

4 Comments

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  1. Matthew Saville

    Solid work here Ryan, thanks for sharing this assignment image with SLR Lounge Premium Critique! I think the pose is great overall, and although I usually advise against kissing when the guy has his hand in his pocket, (it usually makes him look bored with the kiss) …it does work here. However, I’d say that the image overall would be stronger if they were just forehead-to-forehead, the light and his forward-facing pose might lend themselves to that pose better.

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  2. Matt Koch

    If the back round was beautiful I could see including it. But it is not so you are including way to much  into the photo that is taking away from the couple. If a sunset was to be used in the photo make sure it is enhancing it to create beauty to the subject and not taking away from them. Something like this 

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    • Ryan Teague

      No worries thanks for that. I think that is a very personal opinion in regards of what a beautiful sunset looks like but I appreciate your thoughts 

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