New Workshop! Lighting 3 | Advanced Off Camera Flash

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Exif Data
  • 24-70MM
  • f/2.8
  • 70mm
  • 1/180
  • 800

Q&A Discussions

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  1. Matthew Saville

    Hey Russel, thanks for submitting this assignment image! I think you nailed almost everything perfectly, the pose is great, the lighting is great, the processing is solid. Might be better a tiny bit warmer, but only just 200-400 kelvin warmer, not much.

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    • Russell Bradley

      Thank you Matthew, apreciate you taking time to think about my image and giving me positive criticism, will take on board.

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    Matthew Saville

    The main thing I notice, however, is that I can’t see his face at all. I wish I could have at least seen his smile, or maybe also the side of his eyes and nose a little bit.

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    Matthew Saville

    Also, I would burn & dodge a little bit over here to darken some of the edge areas a touch, and therefore emphasize the couple’s faces and arms.

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