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  1. Matthew Saville

    The word “experience” jumps out at me quite a bit. And, to be honest, since it’s a boudoir session, the phrase “experience pricing” may be a bit…misleading? Not sure how to say it haha.

    Honestly, I’d try shrinking the word experience, and enlarging your own logo graphic, because that currently is barely noticeable. 

    I love your text below. Though I might try “…that the world may not witness.”

    Also, the double “that” in the 2nd paragraph could be changed… “…the luxury experience you deserve” maybe.

    Could change “…any items you may own,” to “…any other possessions,”

    Other than that, I really like the general graphic design. It is a bit more edgey and punchy, though, as opposed to soft and warm, so just make sure that is in keeping with your actual style as a photographer…

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    Matthew Saville

    Got some stains on the white backdrop here?

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