New Workshop! Lighting 3 | Advanced Off Camera Flash

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Chapter 6 assignment
Exif Data
  • EF70-200MM F/2.8L IS II USM
  • f/3.5
  • 85mm
  • 1/100
  • 400

Q&A Discussions

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  1. Matthew Saville

    Hi Rachel,

    The expressions look *almost* relaxed here, but I still feel a slight sense of strain especially in the guy’s smile. Try having couples start by looking at each other, laughing into each other’s eyes, and THEN looking at the camera quickly. That expression you get will be a lot more relaxed and natural / genuine. 

    His shirt tuck could be a bit cleaner, and his suit jacket coat tail is hanging out a bit on our right, but other than that, not bad!

    On a 6D and a 70-200 2.8, you could definitely also try hitting ~135mm instead of 85mm, and shoot wide open at 2.8; that lens will do wonderful things for you in that range!

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