New Workshop! Lighting 3 | Advanced Off Camera Flash

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What do you guys think of my first square light attempt? For me her hair on the left is a little bit off.
Exif Data
  • 5D MARK 3
  • Sigma 50MM Art
  • f/1.8
  • 50mm
  • 1/125
  • 800

Q&A Discussions

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    Shivani Reddy

    The light looks beautiful Paco, great job! Right now it seems as though she is looking above your camera, I would either shoot form a higher angle or have her look a little lower. 

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  2. Shivani Reddy

    We get into this later in the headshot workshop but there is a lack of symmetry that is visible in her facial features – her eyes specifically. 

    I would have had her turn her head to show off her better side (figure this out by asking her or testing both sides).  

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    Paco van Leeuwen

    Personally I dont have the feeling she is looking above the camera. I do agree with the a symmetry, her left eye is a little smaller. And in this image only her bottom lip is a little weird. 

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