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Exif Data
  • CANON EOS 5D MARK IV
  • EF35mm f/1.4L II USM
  • f/6.3
  • 35mm
  • 1/200
  • 100

4 Comments

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  1. A
    Shivani Reddy

    This is nice! There are a couple pf things you could tweak – your light source seems to be casting an odd shadow on her arm here. As well as a strong highlight underneath her chin. I would have found a better way  to control your light source to avoid that as well as re position it so that it fills more of there eyes 

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  2. B
    Shivani Reddy

    With her arms stretched out like this it makes it feel as though the action is strained. Have her relax her elbow so there isn’t as much tension in the arms 

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  3. C
    Shivani Reddy

    I almost feel like the image could use more of this background, unless you were working around it and that’s why you cropped. I love the inclusion of the sky and wish there is a bit more of it and a bit more color as well. 

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