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open to constructive comments.
Exif Data
  • NIKON D810
  • 24.0-70.0 MM F/2.8
  • f/7.1
  • 70mm
  • 1/640
  • 200

2 Comments

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  1. Matthew Saville

    Solid work, clearly you’re getting your lighting down no problem, I think the balance of lighting her (paramount, it looks like?) and yet still getting a killer catchlight in her eyes is not easy to do!

    With her hair tucked this way, I don’t know if a double-back light is the right choice, though; I might have had her let her hair down, or if she liked her hair this way, I’d have shot her against a lighter or neutral background without the two backlights. Alternately, it might have worked to do a single overhead hair light.

    Last but not least, posture! Have her stand up tall, breathe deep, and then shoot from an angle slightly higher than eye level…

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  2. Marcos Enrique Ruiz Rivero II

    Matthew,  yes this a 3 light setting. 2 sides and high paramount and camera right down the soft box in a tripod, that is why i could not go higher. I saw Joel grimmer in one of his workshop and i wanted to give a try:-) Thanks for your insight.

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