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What would you do to make this photo better? What could've been improved?
Exif Data
  • ILCE-7M2
  • 85mm F1.4
  • f/11
  • 85mm
  • 1/160 seconds
  • 100

3 Comments

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  1. Tony Dales

    i don’t know how to make it better, but i would bring more of highlights outs. these are two men with big muscles, why not show them off? also, why not show  facial expressions? 

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  2. Timo Ilves

    Cool photo. I agree with previous comment that I would try to chisel out those muscle contour lines. Also artistically maybe use a rim light to bring out the contours of their faces? Unless the intent is to keep them super anonymous and in the dark, then what you’ve done works great.

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  3. Caitlyn Dauphinee

    I also agree just a bit more light might be nice.  I was thinking I personally would have shot from the front of them to see their faces (emotions can add authenticity, so you know it wasn’t just posed), but this photo still looks pretty cool.

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