New Workshop! Lighting 3 | Advanced Off Camera Flash

Show Critique
I took this picture a while ago... so not sure if I applied all the tips from this course... but I thought it was quite a nice narrative:... (show more)
Exif Data
  • DMC-LX100
  • f/2.5
  • 19.3mm
  • 1/3
  • 800

Q&A Discussions

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  1. Matthew Saville

    Hi Jasper,

    Indeed, I can understand this narrative! Your words exactly describe it. Overall, the critique I would give is that the angle makes the framing look kinda awkward, it’s just a head resting atop a blanket. I wish the left hand / arm had also been involved in the photo, and/or the framing had zoomed out a little bit, to help tell a more environmental narrative.

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    Matthew Saville

    Also, the lamp is growing out of their nose! :-(

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