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Late afternoon. The wedding party in shade on roof top lit with one flash fitted with a large umbrella
Exif Data
  • Nikon D810
  • Nikon 50mm f/1.8
  • f/f/5.6
  • 50mmmm
  • 1/160 seconds
  • 200

6 Comments

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  1. A
    Daniel Thullen

    Interesting groups shot Haroon. I think you successfully completed this assignment. The only issue I see with the flash/umbrella is a slight bright area on the bride’s forehead. It could easily be removed in post. My only other comment is compositional: Why is there a bridesmaid between the bride and groom? Well done assignment.

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  2. B
    Curtis Mason

    Nothing to do with the lighting (good job on that) but there seems to be a lot more open space on this side of the image. Maybe a slightly tighter crop over here would fix it.

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  3. C
    SG Photo

    Very good lighting and expressions.

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  4. D
    Tanya Goodall Smith

    This is great! I’m surprised you got such even, soft lighting on a group this large with one umbrella.

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  5. E
    Cameron Wisth

    Super minor critique as I think the image is awesome, maybe look at removing some of the dark circles on the concrete as they are a bit distracting

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  6. F
    Alex Redd

    It seems odd that one of the bridesmaids would be between the groom and the bride

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