New Workshop! Lighting 3 | Advanced Off Camera Flash

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What can I improve to this "no look" portrait?
Exif Data
  • NIKON D750
  • 85.0 mm f/1.4
  • f/1.4
  • 85mm
  • 1/80
  • 12800

Q&A Discussions

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  1. Amanda Siembida

    My eyes are instantly drawn to the dark gap between the trees and not your subject.  IMO shooting lower with less tree would keep your interest more on the subjects.  More foreground less background.

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  2. Vy Vu

    I like it but I think that I would have included feet to show the entirety of the bride’s dress

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    • Giorgio Zamboni

      Thank you Vy Vu! Yes, I experimented another point of view but probably the framing is too hight 

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  3. Matthew Saville

    Very clean, nicely done! I agree with the other feedback that a shot like this is cool and edgey, but it should usually be paired with a more “safe” shot that includes their whole head-to-toe wardrobe, in case they decide they’d prefer that type of image in an album or something.

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    Matthew Saville

    For a cropped-body shot like this, I might get just a bit closer, and then have them look at each other instead of away from each other, to give more intensity to their pose.

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  5. Amanda Siembida

    I like it alot! I guess its all in the eye of the beholder tho! Nice work Giorgio!!

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