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Exif Data
  • CANON EOS 6D
  • 70.0-200.0 mm f/2.8
  • f/2.8
  • 82mm
  • 1/320 seconds
  • 160

5 Comments

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  1. Matthew Saville

    A solid shot, only two things come to mind. Actually three, the main one being that the post-prodiction does seem a touch warm. I’m not sure how this was lit, but it looks like a brightly lit indoor scene; I would have bumped the white balance down just a tiny bit overall.

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    Matthew Saville

    The 2nd thing is, I wish the framing had been slightly more balanced. there’s empty space on his side, and not much on hers. I understand if you had wanted to get the vertical flower column in the shot, but if that were the case then I’d have had them scoot over a bunch so I could still frame them in the center, and include even more of the flower tower.

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    Matthew Saville

    The 3rd thing is, these glass bubbles in the background ought not to “touch” his head in the composition; maybe one step to your right would have re-framed the scene better.

    I’m looking forward to seeing more of your work, Frank! Solid pose; clearly you know what you’re doing ;-)

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  4. frank arimotu

    thank you so much i’ll definetely take note of the pointers next time im shooting

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  5. Mo Holster

    Her face looks a bit strained as if she just barely noticed the camera when you shot it.  Also, the cup in the foreground isn’t really necessary, and there’s a lot of distractions in the back.

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