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Yongnuo 560III was held by a stranger to camera left pointed down towards the crowd. Shot into the susent
Exif Data
  • E-M5
  • Olympus 12-40mm
  • f/2.970854
  • 12mm
  • 1/125 seconds
  • 640

5 Comments

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  1. A
    SG Photo

    Sky is exposed well, but the flash is a little too much, should be down by a stop or so. Nice work getting an assistant from a crowd :)

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  2. B
    Tanya Goodall Smith

    You exposed the sky well. I wish there was more of a clear focal point in the image. The tent is distracting as well.

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  3. C
    Lauchlan Toal

    Nice work keeping the colours in the sky while lighting up the crowd. I think a vertical composition would help this shot – cropping out the white tent and focusing more on the crowd of people and city behind them.

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    • C
      Evan Bartlett

      Love that idea, to go vertical and get just the crowd / sky to the left of the tent.

      I should have tried to get them to move the tent once the sun went down.

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  4. D
    David Hill

    This side of the frame is interesting with the cityscape etc. The other side less so. Perhaps would have reframed with that in mind but appreciate I cant see anything else around to see if that was possible! Not sure that i find the image ‘interesting’ (not meant rudely and appreciate thats’ subjective etc!). I wonder if by having that clean cityscape and then dragging the shutter but still have it obvious that they are people etc may have had more ‘creative intent’. Dave

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