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Exif Data
  • NIKON D750
  • 24.0 mm f/1.4
  • f/2.5
  • 24mm
  • 1/640
  • 640

5 Comments

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  1. A
    David Hill

    Experiment with your crop and see what you think the image looks like when you remove everything to the left of this mark. In other words, the veil is filling the bottom of the image more etc. Appreciate you are moving away from your vision though. Just zoom in on here to look…thats all I did! Dave

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  2. B
    David Hill

    Great idea to use the veil like this…really nice! Good job! Dave

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  3. C
    David Hill

    SETTINGS:  Were you in Auto ISO? Look up ‘ native ISO and why to use it’ rather than in-between settings. Easier than a long explanation here! Dave

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  4. D
    David Hill

    I love the eye connection between them! I do wish there was ‘more natural smiles’ going on as they both look very serious but perhaps that portrays their personalities. And I guess you had lots of other shots offering variety etc. Dave

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  5. E
    David Hill

    Good that you have her ‘tucked into his body’ adding some intimacy to the shot! Plus she will be very happy to look so thin which most ladies want from their photos. Dave

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