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I actually really like the image. However I feel that they are fairly "dead" looking. This entire shoot she was very nervous. what is a... (show more)
Exif Data
  • NIKON D750
  • 50.0 MM F/1.4
  • f/1.4
  • 50mm
  • 1/200
  • 200

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    Matthew Saville

    The first thing I notice, before your mention of her being nervous is his “bored” pocket hand and leg pose. His feet being open towards the camera, and his centered stance, make him seem less connected with her. I’d have him angle his feet towards her a little bit, and shift his hips towards her a little bit.

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    Matthew Saville

    Regarding her pose, her expression is what harms the image most. If they’re nervous, or awkward, or whatever, just spend more time interacting with them, and not even talking about the pose even. get them to look at each other and interact with each other, far more than you worry about getting them to smile at the camera.

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