New Workshop! Lighting 3 | Advanced Off Camera Flash

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Pre wedding in Pargue, shot at 7 o'clock in the morning in a cold november day. I was wearing my winter jacket, my camera was soaking wet... (show more)
Exif Data
  • Nikon AF-S NIKKOR 24-70mm f/2.8G ED
  • f/3.5
  • 34mm
  • 1/160 seconds
  • 500

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  1. Guil Schotte

    Absolutely love this!  Your lighting control is excellent and BG exposure gives this image a powerful story.  The only possible suggestion I would have would be to prevent the strobe behind the subjects from lighting the ground so much – an kind of makeshift gobo on the strobe would prevent that bright flare where light comes through the model’s skirt.  It is just a bit distracting.

    But that aside, WOW.

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    Kayode Olorunfemi

    Brilliant work… wish the light on the floor was not that hot but that’s just a minor distraction. It’s so beautiful especially the contrast between blue and orange. Lovely work!

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    Rich Orange

    Fantastic image. I just think her hand looks a little weird, perhaps the fingers would have been better together and a little softer 

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  4. J Duclayan

    It’s a well made image and all but I too side with Rich when it comes to her hand. At a glance it looks like a freakish hand but looking at it closely, your brain starts to resolve the issue. But other than that, Its pretty awesome. I too would probably make the same mistake with my images. I am trying to be better with my posing which isn’t my strong point. 

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  5. Ciprian Biclineru

    Hi Guys, thank you so much for your feedback. Thanks to you I have made a few changes to the image.

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  6. Dashaun Graham

    Great edit. good shot. everything has been mentioned. already. I do wish she was a bit warmer. 

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