New Workshop! Lighting 3 | Advanced Off Camera Flash

Show Critique
Any critique is great. The crop on some of the pics is odd since I forced it into this 3 photo template.
Exif Data
  • NIKON D750
  • 85mm 1.8

Q&A Discussions

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  1. A
    Shivani Reddy

    His pose here seems a little odd, it makes him look a bit more feminine since he is leaning over and he is losing alot of his posture. The leading lines in that image are outstanding but there is more empty space to his left which makes me feel like if he was standing straight that could have been fixed. 

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  2. B
    Shivani Reddy

    I think there is a tad too much negative space here. 

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  3. C
    Shivani Reddy

    Once again, great leading lines here – I wish you moved a bit to your right so you could have his head close to the hedge just like hers is. 

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  4. Shivani Reddy

    This set of images is a PERFECT example of what this course was designed to do – I can see that you really stopped to think how to best tell their story and your focal lengths and compositions really reflect that. You even have a great variety of expressions and poses! Great job Christine Spalango!

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