New Workshop! Lighting 3 | Advanced Off Camera Flash

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This was a senior high school photo session. The Sun was camera left with a silver reflector at 45 degrees camera right. No editing, SOOC... (show more)
Exif Data
  • NIKON D7100
  • 35mm f1.8
  • f/1.8
  • 35mm
  • 1/250 seconds
  • 400

Q&A Discussions

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  1. A
    Pye Jirsa

    Cropping at the widening point of the waist will make her appear much larger, you also have eliminated her curves by doing so. Crop down at the thigh instead, between the joints vs over them.

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  2. B
    Pye Jirsa

    Hands also cropped at edge of frame.

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  3. C
    Pye Jirsa

    Love this pose, it really shows off her curves as she turns back towards the camera. Very flattering.

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  4. D
    Pye Jirsa

    Light on the face is coming bottom up, hence the shadow right here and under the eyes. Get that light coming top down. If that light is coming from the corn, then add a fill to correct it.

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  5. E
    Pye Jirsa

    I like the placement of the subject, but I would have moved her to the right a bit in the composition, to fit in this nice space here where the lines would lead into her.

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  6. F
    Pye Jirsa

    Have her fix the fly-aways in the hair prior to the shot.

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  7. Zoey Stites

    I feel like it might have been stronger as a vertical shot. There’s more corn than human! :)

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