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Looking for feedback on ways to improve this photo.
Exif Data
  • E-420
  • f/8
  • 16mm
  • 1/250
  • 100

Comments [5]

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    alex kennedy

    Composition is great.  If you can bring up the shadows here a bit so more detail can be seen in this rock, I think it would be better.  If that won’t be easy in post, consider bracketing your exposures next time.

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    • Bruce Philip

      Thanks Alex. I did edit the photo to try and bring up the detail a bit more, but it didn’t quite work how I hoped. That said, I do understand how to edit photos a bit better now so might try again.

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  2. Shivani Reddy

    Such a clean shot Bruce Philip! I love the composition but I agree with Alex, the shadows could be brought up a bit and I also feel like that left side is a little higher but it could just be me haha 

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    • Bruce Philip

      Thanks Shivani. As I said to Alex, I did edit this photo in the past and at that time I would also have levelled it. I may give it another try.

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  3. Bob Taylor

    Perspective is great!  lighten foreground rock and right side shadows a pinch. maybe a vignette. to pull you into the scene.  Lots of empty space on left, both sky and water…experiment with left hand crop.

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