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This shot was taken at a recent wedding of the groomsman just hanging out smoking their cigars. It was my first time using a grid on my... (show more)
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  • 50MM
  • f/4
  • 50mm
  • 1/200 seconds
  • 200


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  1. A
    Timothy Going

    It’s always tough working with smoke or fog, in this shot it almost looks like the top of his head is on fire with how the smoke is coming off. Letting the smoke drift a little more might have given a better angle.

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    • Brandon Toma

      yeah, this was the only shot we were able to get where he wasn’t completely blocked out by smoke. I am not sure if I can take it out in post.

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  2. B
    Timothy Going

    The brightness on this part of the frame is a bit distracting. Gridding the light more or cutting this out in post would be better.

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  3. C
    Timothy Going

    With this being the brightest part of the frame it’s where my eye is first drawn. Gridding the light a little more or lowering it behind the groom more would help.

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