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This is a photo taken during a recent wedding. We were just walking between locations when I took this shot in a park. Can you please... (show more)
Exif Data
  • CANON EOS 5D MARK III
  • 35MM
  • f/1.4
  • 35mm
  • 1/400 seconds
  • 100

6 Comments

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  1. Shivani Reddy

    Love the light here, I think the post production could use some work tho. You are shooting in a predominantly green area which gives off a strong green tint both on her dress and her skin. You can counterbalance this by editing the tint in Lightroom. 

    Here is an article to help: https://www.slrlounge.com/lightroom-color-adjustment-environmental-portraits/

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    Pye Jirsa

    Would have included more of her hand here since you have some negative space up top. 

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  3. Pye Jirsa

    The saturation of the green also seems a bit overpowering – I would tone that down as well. 

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  4. Pye Jirsa

    Since you had the time to set them up I would have perfected the pose by giving her back a bit better posture. Keeping her spine a bit more straight and bring her left hand behind her – you can create better separation between her body and her hand, showing off her form.

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    Pye Jirsa

    I would nix these out to perfect the image. 

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