New Workshop! Lighting 3 | Advanced Off Camera Flash

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We tried to get a bright and airy look on a day when all of my daughters were home and together. We went deep in the closets to try to... (show more)
Exif Data
  • NIKON D810
  • Nikon 85mm F1.8
  • f/F4
  • 85mmmm
  • 1/400 seconds
  • 64

Q&A Discussions

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  1. A
    Lauchlan Toal

    Very neat shot. Personally, I think you could strip away some of the haze and the shot would be stronger. With a quick curves layer the subjects will really pop out of the frame and you’ll still get that great lighting. Good work giving them eye room on the right, really helps the composition.

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  2. B
    David Hill

    Clothes really suit the image and setting…nice one!

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  3. C
    David Hill

    Leave a little more room and frame edge…..just a little close for comfort here.

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  4. D
    David Hill

    I wonder of the composition would have been better if this daughter was leaning this way but on the other arm of the sofa? I say that as my immediate reaction to seeing the image was that she just looks a little awkward leaning this way. Perhaps thats just me! In terms of their ‘heads then creating a nice triangle’ would have worked better too IMO. Nice one overall! Dave

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  5. E
    Alex Valtchev

    How did you get this couch here? :)

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  6. F
    Stephanie Suarez

    Very lovely and stunning shot! The wardrobe selection compliments the scenery. It would be nice if next time the sky was a little less blown out and had natural skies. Overall, great photograph!

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