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how can I improve framing?
Exif Data
  • CANON EOS 5D MARK III
  • EF70-200MM F/2.8L IS II USM
  • f/2.8
  • 200mm
  • 1/160
  • 125

3 Comments

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    Timo Ilves

    I would have included her feel in. Right now they are cut off from her ankle joints.

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  2. Caitlyn Dauphinee

    I agree with Timo Ilves .  I keep hearing critics say to not cut off subjects at the joints.  Also, I think the open sign is distracting, since it’s in focus, and it doesn’t really contribute to the picture.

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  3. Bishoppe Kamusinga

     Timo Ilves thank you for your feed back! @caitlyn dauphinee 

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