New Workshop! Lighting 3 | Advanced Off Camera Flash

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assignment for focus recomposition. was trying to put her eyes in the right third of the frame.
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  1. Mo Holster

    I think you should be able to see both feet, especially the one that is outside the frame.  Try not to cut people off at the joints, because it may give the illusion of a longer leg or arm, since you expect to see a foot or hand where there is none.  Also, I think her pose looks unnatural.  It looks like it would be hard to hold, and not one she would just do on her own.  Maybe find a pose that looks more natural and comfortable.

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    • ariel brown

      mo, thanks for the feedback. when composing, i will make sure to pay attention to not crop at the joints. yes, this pose is a bit unnatural, perhaps i should have had her rest her right arm on her side.

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